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Simple Shadows

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Lady In White
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Simple Shadows

Nothing present
In the dark
But let soft
Radiant spark
And there
To dance with me
A simple shadow
To lessen misery

For here
By one
Stand two
To dance
One day
The sun
Will then
Enhance

And should
You see a
Shadow, simple
In line of eye
In deep of dimple
In green pools
In lay of skin
A shadow’s
Dance to
Draw you in

Simple shadows
Cast their spell
Weave you in
Very well
Come and see
My shadows, deep
Where you may love
And become, complete….
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Very beautiful....and I love the graphic! SEA
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We are complete
unto ourselves -
but
how more complete
when two acknowledge
a gfeater completness
when we allow love inside
Beautiful - another treasure
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For here
By one
Stand two
To dance

That is such an extremely lovely thought amid the beauty of this piece.
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"In green pools
In lay of skin
A shadow’s
Dance to
Draw you in"

Beautiful and exquisite as always, Lady in White...enjoyed the read.

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LadyInWhite~

'Simple shadows
Cast their spell
Weave you in
Very well'


Yes, you certainly do that - very well.
~*Marge*~



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shadows can, indeed, cast spells..so can poetry such as this....
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Lady...this is captivating!
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You are all most kind, thank you so very much....
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I absolutely LOVE this...and so far I haven't read anything from you I don't like.

~~~kingsangel~~~

 
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