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Can't Stop This Heart
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Can't Stop This Heart |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Can't stop this heart from remembering how it used to be the times we shared just you and me Can't stop this heart there's nothing I can do I can't change the fact that I love you Can't stop this heart from leaving a light on refusing to believe that you've really gone Can't stop this heart from wishing dreams came true or for wanting a little more time with you ~SEA~ If I let you into my heart..... will you promise to stay? ~Sue~ |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Nor should you want it to....a lovely read... |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
I know the feeling and you said it so well. Even pain...you write beautifully. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Can't stop this heart from leaving a light on refusing to believe that you've really gone Can't stop this heart from wishing dreams came true or for wanting a little more time with you ======================== Ive said it before ... some things never leave us... some things never should ... this is so you sweet Sea-girlie ... and THAT is a very good thing  your longing in this is lovely in its sincerety laced rhyme beautiful poem Some find subtlety in strangers some find subtlety alone Your eyes,you see everything my eyes,I see its all together now and I know. ~candlebox~ |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
sea..........isn't it funny how our hearts think on their own? helen |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this Sea...James |
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Jill Member
since 2001-02-02
Posts 62Louisiana |
SEA - I love this....you penned this feeling perfectly. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Lady in White~ no, it doesn't really want to, even though I keep asking it to try....  thank youJLR~ From your beautiful writing, I know you can relate....thank you Janet~ you are the queen of heart ache and letting go.....I know you know.... no some things never should leave us....some things just can't...thank you so much 1slick Lady~yes, kind of wierd that it isn't something easily controlled...thank you James~ thank you sweetie Jill~ very nice of you to say, thank you ~SEA If I let you into my heart..... will you promise to stay? ~Sue~ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sea...we let go when theres no longer a need to hold on...this is so exquisitely written dear one... |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
SEA, Been away for a short while. So great to return to such poetic beauty. Love your work. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
sea- this is so beautiful in its longing. in the middle of reading this my eyes welled up with tears but that is a good thing...this touched my heart. thank you. amy "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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