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The Memory Of You
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The Memory Of You |
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Katherine Chandler Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280Florida, USA 
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There once was a time When reflections of you Touched the most warmest Parts of my beating heart. I dreamed of you In fondest repose, Whilst all along I loved you in silence. You, my secret muse Shall never know, For to share my mind Would summon sadness. Feelings shall remain hidden In timeless mental frames Where once the love of you Was all that dwelled within. Thy love now lives Between heart and soul And will reside there Till death calls me home. Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood. T S Eliot |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
 Oh you did such a fantastic job on this poem, and I am sure everyone will relate to it when they read it. I look forward to reading your work everyday keep up the good work, as I love it! Thank you for a great read! |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
The last verse caught me, Loved this Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Kate, this poem really tugged at my heart strings and it was so very obvious that the words came from the depth of your lovely soul.....Sue Suetang |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You, my secret muse Shall never know, For to share my mind Would summon sadness. Feelings shall remain hidden In timeless mental frames Where once the love of you Was all that dwelled within. ============== very cool poem ... I love the premise of the secret muse and the undying need to write of this person wel written piece here ... great use of vocabulary. Welcome to Passion PrincessPout so nice to hace you here with us take care jm Some find subtlety in strangers some find subtlety alone Your eyes,you see everything my eyes,I see its all together now and I know. ~candlebox~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Princess Pout, I can relate to this too. The simplicity and honesty of this are beautiful! Nice writing and welcome to Passions. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
Very soulful! I liked it! ~*~SCG~*~ |
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Katherine Chandler Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280Florida, USA |
Thank you sweetcollege girl, I appreciate your compliment. KateGenuine poetry can communicate before it is understood. |
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Martini Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 308Toronto, Ontario, Canada |
I really enjoyed this one.... thank you for sharing with us. "In three words I can sum up everything I learned about life: It Goes On" |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is a wonderful post... I'm new here, so I hope to read much more fo your work soon! Great job. --Marie "Hope is a thing with feathers that perches in the soul." --Emily Dickinson |
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