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Flirtatious {Haiku}

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KokoStewartKoomoa
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Slow wet spring weather
fragile and fickle snowstorm
warm kiss cold shoulder

© Copyright 2001 Cheryl Stewart Koomoa - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 03-09-2001 10:25 AM       View Profile for VAS   Email VAS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for VAS

Enjoyed the poem and the photo. I don't understand the title, however. Help me.
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Ooh, a Haiku. Anyone who knows me will tell you this is my favourite format.
I understood the title... I think. It was a personification of the snowstorm, "fickle and fragile," also "warm kiss, cold shoulder."
Yeah, that snowstorm is such a tease.
A very nice job on the haiku.
~Allan

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Delightful!
Katherine Chandler
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'Beautiful..' I love the graphic too!
Smiles to you... Kate


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T S Eliot
KokoStewartKoomoa
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Thanks to all for your time to comment.
Yes Flirtatious was meant to mean that spring teases us with a hint of warmth and then gives us the cold shoulder.
Just My Scottish sense of humor in my haiku LOL
May Spring warm your soul and kiss you with sunshine~~~
Allen, I will search to see if you have posted haiku too.I love to do these and tanka and choka as well.

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko


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Hmmm your witty inventions. I have missed these. Were you on the Big Island in snow?
I hope you didn't make a visit here and sneak past me somehow.
Beautiful words,lovely lady.
RJ
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Enjoyed...James
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