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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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0 posted 2001-03-08 05:37 PM



In darkness,
he crept in to my soul.
His sweat,
made me give it all.
His breath,
stole all my senses.
His weight,
captured my spirit.
His wind,
disrupted my heart.
Sweeping me,
back to him,
again and again.


A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

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Martie
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1 posted 2001-03-08 06:25 PM


Walker--You have described well how one person can become so important to another...I think the start of love is often like this. Well done!
serenity blaze
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2 posted 2001-03-15 06:00 PM


oh yeah. I do know this feeling--while reading I was struck how this could also be taken spiritually...I enjoyed. Thank you.
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