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Quiet Rememberance
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Quiet Rememberance |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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I gaze across the horizon the sunshine warms my face, my mind slowly drifts away to another time, another place. We walked along softly talking, laughing, and holding hands. Your eyes searched into my soul while I feel deeper into a trance. With you I felt so many things that I had never felt before, there were so many mixed emotions and still, there was so much more. You showed me how to trust, how to take, and not just give. You taught me the realities of love, while my spirit learned to live. These gifts I hold here in my heart, and in my heart they shall always stay. Today I contemplate about tomorrow, in quiet rememberance of yesterday. Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s* |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Sweet, tender piece, Gentle Spirit...in tune with your name.  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is lovely, GS...very lovely... |
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sans38 Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 117Westland, Michigan |
This was such a beautiful poem! It was a reflection of what true love is all about! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Gentle Spirit, This is lovely, it flowed so nice, enjoyed very much, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
those mixed emotions, D...well I sure know what you mean *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Vas, thank you. My name was derived at the suggestion of another poet here at passions who I have had the pleasure of meeting long before I ever came to passions. It sortah just felt right although some days I don't feel so gentle. lol. Thanks. Sunshine, thanks for the lovely words! *s* Sans, thank you for seeing the beauty. *s* Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s* |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Cerenity, thanks so much for stopping in.  Wynter, the emotions can take us on trips, (some we don't even want to go on) thanks . Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s* |
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DawnG 
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
This is really beautiful. Thank you for sharing it with us. I got a few different things from this poem.Dawn |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
Thanks, for sharing this, I can relate. My husband taught me how to love and accept love. Red |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Very beautiful... I enjoyed this! *S* |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I really like this ending! Great work! These gifts I hold here in my heart, and in my heart they shall always stay. Today I contemplate about tomorrow, in quiet rememberance of yesterday. The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful GS. . . glad that you can see the lessons. . . I really liked this one. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Hi all, I have been very busy, but wanted to make a moment to thank each of you for your kind responses and hope you are all doing well. *s* Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s* |
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Katherine Chandler Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280Florida, USA |
"How to take and not just give.." Loved this line, imagine a lover teaching one how to take and not just give. The thought alone makes me shiver. Wonderful writing. KateBe blessed! Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood. |
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