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My Song
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My Song |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
I finally recognize my song A replay of a sorrowful need to be loved by one who forces me to be one of many to share his heart, his body, or his love My relentless need to be enough that they would only need me want me chose me And yet the ending always plays the same broken heart And I do believe it's now time to write a new song "Some people see the cup as half empty. Some people see the cup as half full. I see the cup as too large." ~George Carlin~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Yep, a New Song...exactly the book I'm almost finished reading, Kellie. Book five of the Mitford series. Have you heard if another one is coming out? In fact, I think I'll get off here for awhile and get some more read. I want to find out how Dooley fares in his trial/arraignment. And yes, it is likely time for a New Song, the best to you in your attainment of a melody and lyrics JUST FOR YOU! |
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sans38 Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 117Westland, Michigan |
This poem really struck a chord in me...."My relentless need to be enough that they would only need me want me chose me"...I know how that feels. I hope your next song has a happy melody : ) |
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Jellybean King Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 153Jelly, Bean |
This poem wonderfully describes the place we all need to arrive at (those of us in that position), the self realization for change, and that it takes courage...sometimes comes after playing that same song over and over again. You described so well the need to be loved, and the pitfall of loving too much...losing the sense of self. Jellybean King |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
VAS - I'm so thrilled you're reading that series! You're actually ahead of me.......I've only read the first 3, so don't tell me what happens!  Thank you for your comments!sans38 - Thank you. Am insistant my next song is going to have a much happier ending. Jellybean King - You understood completely. THANK YOU! A very kind comment. Your name tickles me. I have jars of jellybeans all over my house, never eat them, but I love all the colors!  To hold tomorrow we must first be willing to let go of yesterday. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Dreamkeeper - a new song that you seek, you will find. Anyone that writes like you has much to share, with words and caring. Write on dreamkeeper, write on with those most beautiful words. BC |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Bill, you are a good friend. *hugz* Thank you.......means the world to me! To hold tomorrow we must first be willing to let go of yesterday. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
indeed it is time to write a new song. . . in a new key. . . and with new words. . . you've already begun. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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