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Saxoness
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0 posted 2001-03-08 12:52 PM


Hey all, this is a funky little piece I did in a workshop session in one of my classes. Enjoy


We are an invisible evolution of art
getting thicker quicker.
I am the upfront scarlet woman artist
and you are the
marble hydration firing the furnace,
talking back with a
"Wake up sleeping beauty this is no fairytale".

Rampage matches rampage.
Our recipe has an ideal aroma
with a little extra bite.
Propel me beyond the stars,
fall back to our Erotic Astrology.

Viva your kismet baby.
I love you.
Enjoy the difference.



"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

© Copyright 2001 Angela Erin Burke - All Rights Reserved
doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25
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1 posted 2001-03-08 04:42 PM


quote:
Viva your kismet baby.
I love you.
Enjoy the difference.


fabulous!



great write, angela! take a bow

Irish Rose
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2 posted 2001-03-08 08:56 PM


You go girl




[This message has been edited by Kathleen (edited 03-08-2001).]

ethome
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3 posted 2001-03-12 01:57 PM


Really outstanding work! Very well crafted!
Sven
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4 posted 2001-03-12 06:35 PM


"viva your kismet baby. . . "

I love that line!!!    

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

desperado
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since 1999-05-24
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5 posted 2001-04-19 06:11 AM


ok so I'm a day late and a dollar short (hey now, no short people jokes), but viva?  sounds pretty good.  though I like that last line.  enjoy the difference.  sounds like s ultry enticement to me  woo hoo!

People demand freedom of speech to make up for the freedom of thought which they avoid. --Soren Kierkegaard

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