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Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

0 posted 2001-03-07 08:19 PM



Butterfly

Butterfly, kindred butterfly...
my sweet little one,
greet me with dewdrops on roses and snapdragons,
rise with the tangerine sun
~ * ~
Butterfly, angel miracle
feathered with rainbow wing
waltz with windchimes in the evening
to my heart softly sing
~ * ~
Butterfly, glorious beauty,
breath fairy laughter and lavender dreams
paint the trees with memories
decorate the sky's ebony with starbeams
~ * ~
Butterfly, companion rare,
flutter gracefully by my side
wisely to watch over me
forever as my guide
~ ~ ~
Butterfly, oh butterfly
fill my spirit with heavenly splendor,
only you can make my heart beat again
only you can kiss it so tender
~ * ~
Butterfly, dear majesty
follow the light to Venus' kingdom above,
one day, we'll soar together there...
upon the celestial yellow brick road of love
~ * ~
Gentle soulmate, elusive friend
I bid thee good day with a sigh
you shall remain magical as Spring moring mist
my devotion is eternal like a butterfly

*By Melissa Honeybee*



The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

~Melissa P. Monette~




[This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 03-07-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Melissa P. Long-Monette - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-03-07 08:43 PM


Butterfly, kindred butterfly...
my sweet little one,
greet me with dewdrops on roses and snapdragons,
rise with the tangerine sun
~ * ~
Butterfly, angel miracle
feathered with rainbow wing
waltz with windchimes in the evening
to my heart softly sing
~ * ~
Butterfly, glorious beauty,
breath fairy laughter and lavender dreams
paint the trees with memories
decorate the sky's ebony with starbeams
~ * ~
Gentle soulmate, elusive friend,
I bid thee good day with a sigh
you shall remain magical as Spring morning mist
my devotion is eternal like a butterfly
~ * ~
Butterfly, dear majesty
follow the light to the butterfly kingdom above,
one day, we'll soar together there...
upon the celestial yellow brick road of love
====================

Oh Melis...this is so enchanting and lovely
and I'm not just saying so because its so very sweetly gifted to me.
Your imagery in this is stunning...
and your rhyme choices are perfect...
I know after reading this(and the other)
that you have a very poetic butterfly muse of your own to inspire you...
and this is a very lovely inspire..
thank you for sharing it me sweetie...
thank you very much.





Some find subtlety in strangers
some find subtlety alone
Your eyes,you see everything
my eyes,I see its all together now
and I know.
~candlebox~

Celeste
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since 2000-11-11
Posts 597

2 posted 2001-03-07 08:44 PM


Oh beautiful! Magical captivating images. I applaud.

"Some people see the cup as half empty. Some people see the cup as half full. I see the cup as too large."

~George Carlin~

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada
3 posted 2001-03-07 08:57 PM


Missy,
Lovely butterfly imagery...beautifully penned.

Poeminister

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

4 posted 2001-03-07 10:23 PM



for Melis ...




Some find subtlety in strangers
some find subtlety alone
Your eyes,you see everything
my eyes,I see its all together now
and I know.
~candlebox~

Aimster
Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
5 posted 2001-03-07 11:01 PM


melissa-

wowza! this is absolutely stunning
imagery--you paint a beautiful picture
w/ your words. this was so touching &
lovely. absolutely wonderful work! i
know janet adores it!

take care.
amy

suthern
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
6 posted 2001-03-08 10:29 AM


Such a beautiful poem for such a beautiful lady. *S* Well done!
vandana
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Member Patricius
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463
USA
7 posted 2001-03-08 10:41 AM


enjoyed it a lot
Chelsea~
Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260
Ontario, CANADA
8 posted 2001-03-09 12:38 PM



missy,

wonderful tribute, the last two
verses were expressed so uniquely
and beautifully, I really enjoyed
this

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
9 posted 2001-03-14 12:10 PM


Melissa you couldn't have written this about a more special person....she's been a great poet friend to me and many many others.....I think you penned this very well....

Gentle soulmate, elusive friend
I bid thee good day with a sigh
you shall remain magical as Spring morning mist
my devotion is eternal like a butterfly

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

[This message has been edited by ethome (edited 03-14-2001).]

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
10 posted 2001-03-14 07:16 PM


Melissa~
I know I read this before and I'm so ashamed
to see that I'd not replied...Good thing I
came back for another read tonight!!
This is so beautiful and touched by the
spirit of the butterfly that soars free
today because of our very own JM...Hugs to
you Melissa for this very special gift~



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