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All Her Aces
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All Her Aces |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
All Her Aces Not too long ago in a City name Ineedyou there lived a man named James that kind of fell in love with a woman named SeeyouSue. This was not her real name but for the purposes of this story it will have to do. Now Sue was a feisty lovely girl as many men admired her pearls and James was no exception. Each time his eyes admired her thighs he thought to himself "now isn't that perfection." So on one Sunday morn he blew his horn round in back of Sue's little love shack. For it seems she had promised him a bubbly soak for two at the local Soakum Up Good Health Spa. Yes it's true. And this was his big chance to participate in some romance and get a closer look or two at Sue's big beautiful forty two's. Sue was proud of them twin forty two's and she was determined every admiring eye would have an opportunity to share "the natural beauty God has given me." Seems Sue would never miss a chance to share a fresh hot tub romance in different sundry places. And James knew in just a few Sue would be revealing all her aces. So Sue steps from her love shack door wearing a red dress bulging in all the appropriate places. And James finds himself yelling "Sue I Love You" while his engine revs wildly and his heart races. In a flash we arrive at the spa and not once did I take my eyes off of Sue's lack of bra. We're in the spa now and oh my, my, Sue just dropped her dress right from her chest and now it's sliding down to her thighs. Behold right before my bulging eyes I now see the finest chest that money can buy. "I think I love this woman but don't ask me why." By now I have stood there staring for what seems like an eternity checking out Sue's lovely thighs and all the rest. Just me and Sue and oh yes, did I mention that bulging chest? Sue knows just what to do. She grabs my arm and pulls me in. The time has come to sink or swim. What should I do? I smiled at Sue and I'm telling you watch those smiles around Sue cause there's no telling what Sue will do, especially when Sue is sharing a hot tub with you. Jameslee@March07,2001 |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
what should you do with darlin' Sue? well, my friend, that's up to you! those 42's ain't all she's got! she's got you in a real tight spot!  hehe... enjoyed this much....it's got it all... a storyline with a mystery ending, a babe on the make, and a confused guy who can't figure out what to do with her... lol.... it's HOT!! love it! thanks for the read *grin |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
ROFL!!!! This was a hilarious story, James. Very clever and original my friend. Thank you for the laugh!!  LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I'm shall I say, speechless... Well, it's cute, well written and you said, truestoryaboutyouandsue? Well,someoneshouldsuethatsue! Watchoutforsue! or Goodluckwithsue!  A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
hey my middle name is Sue, thanks for a great story  Kathleen Blake "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
LOL darlin...I aint saying a word...nope I wont...nope... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you doreen, Lone Wolf, walker, Kathleen and Paula for reading and commenting..Well actually I did know what to do with Sue but that came later after the massage and the shampoo. And there is no telling what Sue will do...of course all my poems are true whether a thought, an experience, a desire, romantic, a hope or a dream, or a fantastic fantasy...James |
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