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walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-03-07 06:22 PM



Whisper, sweet things to me,
my love.
I'm ready for this love
and I cannot hold back no more.
Tell me that you love me,
my dear.
And I will give it all to you.
Let's take this step together,
love,
for time is running by.
Let's make this moment,
now,
the fondest memory that we will
ever have.




A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
Lone Wolf
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since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
1 posted 2001-03-07 06:51 PM


May you always have that moment. Beautifully written.

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada
2 posted 2001-03-07 06:53 PM


Walker--Lovely write...enjoyed the read.

Poeminister

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