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Gullible |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Gullible Virginia Salter Gertrude and Heathcliffe atop lamp-post perch rapt attention on guitar pickin’ Tony Turn in tandem ever on guard gray and white forms compliment soft clouds One by one each lifts off flits, soars dips dives disappears into the distance gone barren pole stark reminder © July 5, 2000 wrote this in the park, where a concert was going on and gulls were watching with us |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
VAS - I read it twice, liked it both times. BC |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
VAS, did you wonder what had been on the pole before or after? It becomes a circle again doesn't it? I liked it though. ME |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
A very pleasant piece. |
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JCGF Member
since 2001-01-19
Posts 72MA |
Another good one Vas. I had to read it three time then four and then once more.  Thanks again, Tammy |
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