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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2001-03-07 09:37 AM



Unsilenced

Supressed are the words, once voiced of love
all thoughts of truth kept in hold.
Behind me lie visions waiting in sheets,
rainbowed soft hues in unfold.

Lips press together in wait of new touch,
a soft caressing of skin.
Wasting not, a moment of time
of suspended impulses within.

I meet in the silence, in shadows of time.
and rise to it's passionate calls.
Drowned in the intimate details of mind
through the Niagra of dreams, where love falls.

A kiss is a kiss but released unto lips
that scald with a burning of fire,
will steam away seal of the thoughts held on lips
and release once again their desire.


~Wynter



"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



© Copyright 2001 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Celeste
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1 posted 2001-03-07 09:45 AM


Oh wow! I'm speechless.....You have such a talent!

"One out of four people in this country is mentally imbalanced. Think of your three closest friends - and if they seem okay, then you're the one."

JLR
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2 posted 2001-03-07 09:56 AM


Powerfull...emotional...all those lips!
bslicker
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3 posted 2001-03-07 10:29 AM


Wynter,
Great write.

Words, to touch,
to thoughts, to lips.
Amazing what a kiss could bring.

Bernie




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serenity blaze
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4 posted 2001-03-07 10:55 AM


ooooh...wynter! Looks like it may be time to turn to spryng! Loved this one---you wrote of a kiss that shouts. Wonderful!
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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2001-03-07 12:03 PM


Well done! This is fantabulous!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2001-03-07 03:43 PM


Dreamkeeper
don't know about the talent, but the feelings are always there, thank you huggzzz
J
lips are nice aren't they

Bernie
thank you, a kiss is almost as wonderful as a touch

Serenity
well "A kiss Is Not Just A Kiss" to me

Interloper
glad you liked *s

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



ethome
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7 posted 2001-03-12 11:53 AM


Well now, this is sensual stuff! The Niagra of dreams, where love falls...oh I like that! this one flows nicely and passionately Wynter!

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2001-03-12 11:47 PM


thank you E

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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