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Rosebud1229
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0 posted 2001-03-07 01:02 AM


Dreams so obscure ,all hidden,
In this dream world seems, all is ridden,
To a mountain of fantasy,
We seek escape , an esctasy,
Imagination prevails our realities,
Into this dream world we indulge,
Transcending into this vice,
Sorry no device could change,
Nor tomorrow for today,
Dreams of obscure little sins,
Seems no one ever wins,
But yet we sleep for yet another scene,
seems all is merely out of sight,
In this semi-consciousness fight,
Of dreams,
For what is real?


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Secret Whisper
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Through the Looking Glass
1 posted 2001-03-07 07:07 AM


"For what is real?" Life is my illusion. But isn't reality all about preception. If I precieve the world as truth, is it not then truth?

Beautiful write. Very intriguing.




"Death marks the beginning, not the end. It is our journey to God." --Billy Graham

Rosebud1229
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2 posted 2001-03-07 11:57 AM


thank you I DO LOVE the illusion of what we so often perceive as truth, which sometimes were so wrapped up in the illusion it's often hard to tell.
Cerenity
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3 posted 2001-03-08 12:12 PM


Hi Rosebud,

Yes very intriguing which are dreams and what is reality, wonderfully express thought provoking, one I must put in library thank you,

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



Rosebud1229
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4 posted 2001-03-08 12:40 PM


thanks so much Cerenity, I love to dive into the realities of dreaming after all I do think it's a deeper part of ourselves we keep hidden, but when we dream a little reality seems to surface.
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