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Red-uni
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0 posted 2001-03-07 12:05 PM





Words flowing
from pens and keyboards,
as minds unload.
Birth of wee baby bird,
crumpled car; someone dies,
sad words to tell.
Words of heartbreak,
of love or friend.
Words for living and dying.
Power of words,
shared througout the ages.


© Copyright 2001 Kathy Bonet - All Rights Reserved
Mother_Earth
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1 posted 2001-03-07 11:18 AM


Red-uni, you wrote some powerful words in a short space. Makes the little gray cells work! I liked it, ME
Temptress
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2 posted 2001-03-07 06:25 PM


Red,
The power of words is awesome and very mysterious at times. I do like what you've put into this short and simple poem.

Lone Wolf
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Lansing, MI USA
3 posted 2001-03-07 06:48 PM


Red-uni,

Such truth in your words. No matter what happens, life always goes on and poetry always keep flowing. Well said.

Lone Wolf


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Poeminister
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Regina SK; Canada
4 posted 2001-03-07 06:49 PM



Wonderfully said. Enjoyed the read.

Poeminister

walker
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since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
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5 posted 2001-03-07 06:56 PM


Alot of wisdom written in this poem. Thanks!

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

Bill Charles
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6 posted 2001-03-07 09:38 PM


Red-uni - I liked it when I read it. Then I went back and read it again, and liked it even more.

BC

Red-uni
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Georgia, USA
7 posted 2001-03-07 10:53 PM


Hi Gang,
I thank all of your for your comments. I am really enjoying posting at Passions. You people are so nice. You have made me feel very welcome.
Red

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