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Mike
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0 posted 2001-03-06 11:01 PM


Ensconced in glow of hunter's moon,
...Orion guards the night,
While Seven Sisters, tapers high,
...dark welkin sky ignite,
Polaris stands in silent watch,
...o'er garden of the gods,
As Milky Way in endless bloom,
...lights heaven's promenades,
Comets course from 'yon to ever,
...past Southern Cross quiescent,
Man gazes up in wond'rous awe,
...upon the night, transcendent,
Flowing stars in endless stream,
...diaphonous ephods,
Mere mortals drink of heaven's splendor,
...sweet nectar of the gods.




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Butterflies_dont_cry
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1 posted 2001-03-06 11:50 PM


Mike~
Once again your words sing like a wonderous
dream, pulling the reader into the the most
beautiful visions...thank you for the
light that you weave into the verses...thank
you for sharing your gift with such grace
and style~

Cerenity
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2 posted 2001-03-07 12:22 PM


Hi Mike,

I have to agree with Miss Butterfly on this amazing writing here, simply breath-taking, you are gifted,,

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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3 posted 2001-03-07 01:42 AM


Mike~
Just too, too lovely !
I love your paint of the night !
Ambrosia, indeed !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Mike
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4 posted 2001-03-07 06:12 PM


Butterfly... *smile* thanks so much for the special reply... take care...
Cerenity... appreciate your reading and responding... danke... glad you liked
Marge... thank you kind and gracious lady for the wonderful reply... may the moon shine down upon you tonight...

Denise
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5 posted 2001-03-07 09:13 PM


Simply breathtaking, Mike! Absolutely beautiful!! More!! More!! More!!
Lone Wolf
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6 posted 2001-03-07 09:28 PM


Mike,

This was awesome. The imagery is superb. I can see it all right before me. Very well done!!

Lone Wolf


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Poeminister
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7 posted 2001-03-07 09:32 PM


Mike-Lovely painting. Enjoyed the read

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