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Celeste
Senior Member

since 2000-11-11

Posts 597

0 posted 2001-03-06 09:50 PM

Unnoticed by most
in the early hours of dawn
each soul wakens quietly
as God touches the sky
in colors soft and delicate
and in the silence of this tender moment
we so rarely even see
hope blooms within
as we are blessed with the gift
of another day

"One out of four people in this country is mentally imbalanced. Think of your three closest friends - and if they seem okay, then you're the one."

Rex Allen McCoy
Member Elite

since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

1 posted 2001-03-06 10:07 PM

Very lovely ... sort of reminds me of the one I posted in 'Holiday forum'
Only this is more to the point
Very well said

Dawn Eclipse
Senior Member

since 2000-01-31

Posts 637
The Horsehead Nebula

2 posted 2001-03-06 10:12 PM

beautifully put! i would love to see the start of a new day.. if i was awake enough to appreciate it! thanks for the read!

"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
~Broadway Musical RENT~

*Cassandra Roseen*

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

3 posted 2001-03-06 10:56 PM

kelli-

this is so lovely...really like this
a lot! you have an amazing gift and i
sure am glad you decided to stay around
here--this touches the heart and soul.
*sigh* such a soft write

take care.
amy

"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words."

Embers_Before_God
Member

since 2001-03-06

Posts 101
USA

4 posted 2001-03-06 11:08 PM

I struggle to find the beauty sometimes when I awake...I have a child and that, along with my wife, helps greatly. Without them, I doubt I could find reason...your poem was nicely done and I can relate well to it...Embers

Dance with me under the moon. Touch my pale skin. Devour me. Love me.

Red-uni
Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 192
Georgia, USA

5 posted 2001-03-07 12:41 PM

Nice poem. I enjoy reading your pieces.
Red

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

6 posted 2001-03-07 01:08 AM

This is profoundly beautiful!! Thank you for posting. Just wonderful!

2dalimit
Member Elite

since 2000-02-08

Posts 2228
Mississippi coast

7 posted 2001-03-07 06:58 AM

Your words create peace within.
Melton

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

8 posted 2001-03-07 07:00 AM

congrats on 500 posts! nicely written

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

9 posted 2001-03-07 07:35 AM

Thanks be to God! And thank you for writing it!

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

10 posted 2001-03-07 10:26 AM

Thank you for reminding me of this!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

11 posted 2001-03-07 10:47 AM

No, I sit and watch, and wonder....

Celeste
Senior Member

since 2000-11-11

Posts 597

12 posted 2001-03-07 11:27 AM

Thanks so much everyone for your replies.

"One out of four people in this country is mentally imbalanced. Think of your three closest friends - and if they seem okay, then you're the one."

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

13 posted 2001-03-07 01:02 PM

some of us notice dreamkeeper. . .

wonderful. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

14 posted 2001-03-07 01:04 PM

"hope blooms within
as we are blessed with the gift
of another day"

So very true...beautifully said.

PM

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

15 posted 2001-03-07 04:32 PM

I think you've captured the reason I like sunrises so much. *S* It's not just the beauty... it's the promise. Well done!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

16 posted 2001-03-07 07:26 PM

what can I say..this was rather special and I too am glad you have decided to stay around {{huggzz}}

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

17 posted 2001-03-08 08:24 PM

yup, there's nothing a good night's sleep cant cure and tomorrow is another day to start refreshed and anew..

lovely thoughts

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