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Tara Simms
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0 posted 2001-03-06 02:01 PM



Soon

I’ll walk down the aisle
In my gown with a smile
Take my vows and say, “I do”

I’ll love so much more
Than I ever have before
When I give myself to you

Ring on your finger
~Oh~ how I’ll linger
Gazing into eyes so blue

I’ll promise forever
Part from you, never
When I bind myself to you


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1 posted 2001-03-06 02:06 PM


Very nice piece. Vows...such important promises, such important moments.

Are you about to step up to the altar?

Kerri S
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since 1999-06-08
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2 posted 2001-03-06 02:23 PM


What beautiful vows you have written. I am sure the lucky man will cherish those words

Kerri

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3 posted 2001-03-06 03:26 PM


Is this the same Tara of the melancholy words??
Beautiful write, hope its about you.
Sandra

Tara Simms
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Honea Path, SC USA
4 posted 2001-03-06 04:24 PM


Yes! Wedding bells are ringing in my future (August 11, 2001)! I've been so busy with wedding plans that I haven't had much time to write.
Aimster
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5 posted 2001-03-06 11:12 PM


Tara-

this is so beautiful! congratulations.
it's wonderful to see you so happy...
very lovely write indeed.

take care
Amy

"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words."


Tara Simms
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6 posted 2001-03-07 01:31 PM


Thanks for the reply Amy.
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