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kitkat
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since 2000-01-11
Posts 878
Nova Scotia

0 posted 2001-03-06 01:19 PM


Always, Forever and Then Some

My eyes look into yours
so deep into your soul
I find my existence
Lost in passion
discovering desire
My appetite longing
only you
ALWAYS

My heart beats strong
as thy breath quickens
emotion brought forth
so long forgotten
reborn again
from your touch
Only you
FOREVER

I give to you willingly
without hesitation
the total being I am
As we explore life
discovering laughter
uncovering sensations
only you
and Then Some

My devotion unyielding
with warmth and passion
Whispering into your ear,
When the stars burn out
and new life begins
I will be there waiting
For I Love You
Always, Forever and Then Some.


Kathy Harmon © March 6, 2001


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You got to get up every morning with a smile on your face
and show the world all the love in your heart
Then people are gonna treat

© Copyright 2001 Kathy Harmon - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-03-06 04:36 PM


hey you....
such a lovely verse of promise...devotion and passion.
wonderful to see you so full of anticipation
and to see your name and smile here today
well done poetess kat
take care
jm

Some find subtlety in strangers
some find subtlety alone
Your eyes,you see everything
my eyes,I see its all together now
and I know.
~candlebox~

sans38
Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 117
Westland, Michigan
2 posted 2001-03-06 06:30 PM


OHHHH How wonderful! I truly enjoyed reading this beautiful poem.
kitkat
Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878
Nova Scotia
3 posted 2001-03-06 06:31 PM


Thanks Janet..your replies always brighten my day.... Oh, btw Love is well and alive here in Nova Scotia :-)
Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA
4 posted 2001-03-06 06:32 PM


Wonderful writing, kitkat!! I love the end. Perfect!

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

snowpants
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since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061
KS
5 posted 2001-03-06 08:01 PM


'My eyes look into yours
so deep into your soul
I find my existence
Lost in passion
discovering desire'

Beautiful poem, kitkat!! It's wonderful that you've found true love!!

sp


do I believe we'd be better off apart?
can I see my world without you in it?
baby, not for a single minute...

Secret Whisper
Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass
6 posted 2001-03-06 08:06 PM


Wonderfully passionate! My compliments. The first stanza is beautiful.

"Death marks the beginning, not the end. It is our journey to God." --Billy Graham

catalinamoon
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since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone
7 posted 2001-03-06 09:05 PM


Very nice, Kat, what a beautiful thing love can be.
Sandra

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