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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2001-03-06 10:31 AM



Tears that Shed

Wakened
Crying, shaking
With thoughts of worlds gone by,
Of ancestors lost, up in smoke:
Life's death.


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-03-06 10:33 AM


Wynter....thank you....
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2001-03-11 04:05 PM


Wynter~
Yes !
Compelling - succinct.
~*Marge*~


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ethome
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3 posted 2001-03-11 04:08 PM


I like this one Wynter although it cries so! I really appreciate the mood! take care

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2001-03-12 11:52 PM


Sunshine, Marge & E
thank you ..was just a thought as I was watching a pbs channel that morning...

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



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