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CD
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since 2001-01-27
Posts 101


0 posted 2001-03-05 07:10 PM


My Dear Love,

I hope you received
My last letter
A poem it was
To describe your beauty

You mean a lot to me
I wish you would say yes
I remember you all the time
The rustling leaves remind me of you -

The gentle white snow
The warm bright morning sun
The cool refreshing breeze
Are all memories of you

I wait for your words
I want to hear your voice
I want to embrace you
I want to hold you forever

O Love
Say something my Love
I wait patiently for your words
Time shall stop but I will not

I waited for your words
I am waiting for your words
I will forever wait for your words
Your words - the song of Love

Love,
One in Love with You.

© Copyright 2001 CD - All Rights Reserved
Celeste
Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597

1 posted 2001-03-05 08:20 PM


A beautiful love letter. Love can be a beautiful thing. May it always be that for you.

"One out of four people in this country is mentally imbalanced. Think of your three closest friends - and if they seem okay, then you're the one."

Brian Beaudry
Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 57
Northern Ontario Canada
2 posted 2001-03-05 08:48 PM


A letter that would make any lover melt with passion my friend!! Well done!!
Brian

Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

3 posted 2001-03-05 11:59 PM


I like it's simplicity...very nice work...

K


...and I have found a lifetime can be lived in one moment...

Cerenity
Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
4 posted 2001-03-06 03:05 PM


Hi CD,

"Oh" how hard it is waiting for another to share with you the loving motions you desire, awesome poetry here, very much enjoyed,

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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