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Marsha
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0 posted 2001-03-05 11:31 AM


Contradictions

You say that I don’t give you enough
Then you say that I give far too much
You tell me life's hard that I should be tough
Then you say life needs a gentle touch
I never know how the night will end
Will we be fighting at daggers drawn?
Or will you be my loving giving friend?
This relationship should be foresworn

You say that you really care about me
Then you say that I shouldn’t care at all
You tell me that this isn’t meant to be
Then you say into your arms I must fall
I never comprehend how you will act
Will we be watching a sunrise at peace?
Or will you be showing me hurt’s fact?
This relationship should entirely cease

You say that I’m your moon and sun
Then you say I want you all the time
You tell me that lately I am no fun
Then you say I’m frivolous and too fine
I never understand where you’re are
Will we be sharing a very loving kiss?
Or will you be saying I go far too far
This relationship shouldn’t be like this

You say that you want to hold me near
Then you say I keep pushing you away
You tell me that to you I’m so very dear
Then you say that I make you with me stay
I never perceive what it is you desire
Will we be spitting and fighting again
Or will you be wrapping me in your fire
This relationship shouldn’t bring pain

Marsha






Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning







[This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 03-05-2001).]

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sans38
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1 posted 2001-03-05 11:51 AM


What a wonderful poem....it says so much about what a rollercoaster ride love can be.
Paula Finn
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2 posted 2001-03-05 02:10 PM


Girl girl girl...kick him in the as...terick and tell him this is me take it or leave it...you are too fine to let him run you in circles...hugs and kisses sister of my soul
Sunshine
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3 posted 2001-03-05 02:14 PM


and yes, the ins and outs of relationships....
Kerri S
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4 posted 2001-03-05 02:41 PM


your poem shows exactly how love is between anyone. one minute we are there everything the next were nothing. Although you said it better. Great poem Marsha

Kerri

catalinamoon
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5 posted 2001-03-05 03:23 PM


Oh my, Marsha, this one sounds like a very difficult person, love like this is so painful, and yet so hard to give up, becuase of those good moments. Loved this.
Sandra

ethome
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6 posted 2001-03-05 04:18 PM


It's just damn hard to please some people. I say you are a sweet poet and I'd find someone else to say nothing but nice things about me if I was you...but then I'm kind of partial to ya considering the fact that you did finally find me a couple of doctors... a ....you haven't sent them yet is there a problem? I'll pay the freight!

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

Butterflies_dont_cry
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7 posted 2001-03-06 10:00 PM


Marsha...tis true if we try to please
someone else all of the time the most
important person of all is let
down....ourselves....an excellent write!
with an awesome message...be true to
yourself and the rest will come~


"I wish the real world would just stop
Hasseling me!"
Real World MB20

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
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Charlotte, NC
8 posted 2001-03-06 11:00 PM


marsha--

you penned my heart with this one!
excellent powerful write about the
struggle and fustration of what can be
a very much one-sided relationship. i
agree w/ the others...live and love for
yourself, and don't try to fit the other
person's idea of what you should be. i
as u know speak with a little
experience on this. you
will only hurt that much more in the end.
take care
love ya
amy

"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words."



[This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 03-06-2001).]

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