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Intrusion
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Intrusion Virginia Salter Quiet clusters rest as gentle strummings reverb air waves distant rumble intrudes closer, closer louder thoughts tumble answers sought rails fill box and flat cars upset peace solitude with a call to roam to adventure too quickly passing by no patience leaves lonely, wandering hearts behind © July 5, 2000 |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
What an amazing piece of work ... I can't believe it went through the gauntlet without a comment ... I do believe I'll add this to my library ... to be sure  beautifully written Virginia |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I'm surprised to find this still on another page, it's wonderful, fresh and specific. Kathleen Blake "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
I do like the way this walked into my day... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thank you all. It is amazing how things drop down so quickly...but this is a very active place. Some things don't even get seen before they drop out of sight. Hmmmmm, if there is no one to see, is there still a vision? |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Descriptive and thoughtfully penned. Excellent write. Poeminister |
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