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Words Unspoken |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Words Unspoken What is it you desire as the time continues on? Is it friendship of forever or just a moments dawn? Do you wish to share a bit of breath, not suffocating so, just tell me of your wishes before I leave to go. What is it that you think of me, if words could silhoutte? Am I just like the last one, so easy to forget? Or do I have at least some charm to tempt you with a spell, if loving you is not enough, express to me, your tell. What secrets do you hide inside of wishes to come true? Must one have to reach in deep, to release that part of you? Can you not trust that when one says those words, you hide from view are meaningful and lasting those words "I Love You, Too." ~Wynter * sorry Keth I had to come back and jot this one down ..couldn't rest until I did...*s "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 03-05-2001).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I loved your sentiments and tender searching in this piece Wynter ... very nicely written!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Wynter - this is very loving, and tells so much of your inner being. I sense a lot there to give, especially from that warm heart that you have. BC |
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DreamLess Member
since 2001-02-28
Posts 92 |
i really liked this piece ..and by the way i admire your writings ..i find it very interesting .. WRITTEN BY ME..(17 YRS HIGHSCHOOL GIRL) EASY ON ME.. I'M JUST AN AMATEUR |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
A beautiful writing from a beautiful soul. "Success is going from failure to failure without losing enthusiasm." ~Winston Churchill~ |
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Taffetta Junior Member
since 2001-02-26
Posts 27 |
Beautiful words. "I love you" is sometimes very difficult to say, especially if one has been very hurt in the past with another relationship. You have written your thoughts very thoughtfully. Taffetta |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Kit thank you, Kit. I am glad you enjoyed Bill cold hands warm heart...  thank you BCDreamLess thank you for admiring, there are many poets on here to enjoy Dreamkeeper thank you for such lovely words {{huggzzz}} Taffetta true but you should be able say the words along with the actions *s "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Wynter, "Oh signing here" I haven't heard those words in so long and I would love to share them with someone who wants me too you know! im keeping in safe place this wonderful peice, thank you. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Cerenity.. I understand totally huggss~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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