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In Dreams Alone (Acire's Challenge)
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In Dreams Alone (Acire's Challenge) |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
In dreams alone I can still see that woman the one I wanted to be Wild and free Love and laughter shimmering in emerald eyes and a beautiful contentness from deep within like a gentle golden light surrounding all she loves There she is dancing in my dreams beckoning me to reach her She just seems so far away She is the moon and I'm the sun Forever chasing her "Success is going from failure to failure without losing enthusiasm." ~Winston Churchill~ |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Ah i've wanted to be that girl, Nicely done. Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
dreamkeeper - another from your heart, touching all who read it. Nicely done. BC |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
You'll find her. Just have to have faith my friend. I am betting she is in there and yu don't even know it yet. Waiting for her chance to be someone.  Lone Wolf |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
Hi, I very much enjoyed your poem. Good write. Red |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
are you sure that you haven't caught her yet??  excellent. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Beautiful, kellie! Maybe we always need to have a goal just beyond our reach, even as we approach it...so we continue to strive for who He sees us to be. Lovely dreams, hold on and believe...isn't that what we must do? |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I like the comparision between sun and moon...excellent writing. Poeminister |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Moon Dust - Thank you! Bill - Thanks so much! Appriciate that. Lone Wolf - I hope so....You're very kind. Red-Uni - Thank you! I've much enjoyed your writing! Sven - I wish!!! Thank you for the kind welcome back. VAS - Very true......may we always hold the dream. You're such a good friend. Poeminister - Thank you! I hoped someone would catch that! "Success is going from failure to failure without losing enthusiasm." ~Winston Churchill~ |
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