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Disgruntled
Junior Member

since 2001-03-01

Posts 13

0 posted 2001-03-04 08:50 PM

Unshed tears,
They fill my heart to brimming,
Every time I see your face,
Hear the sweet symphony of your voice,
Another drop is added,
And now it is filled,
Up to the brim,
And every day I await,
Expecting that final droplet,
The one that will send my senses reeling,
My emotions splashing across the floor of a love that was not there,
Your love.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-03-04 08:54 PM

Disgruntled,

Such sadness here. it is never easy to let go, yet we must move on and look forward. Someone very wise once told me tomorrow is a brighter day. I truly believe that.

Welcome to Passions. Nice work!

Lone Wolf

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

2 posted 2001-03-04 09:05 PM

Yep some people are harder to let go from, butin time you will. Nice work.

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.

CD
Member

since 2001-01-27

Posts 101

3 posted 2001-03-05 07:34 PM

Very bitter indeed.

Some of us have experienced this and I for one am glad that this feeling is shared by others

Good write

CD

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

4 posted 2001-03-05 09:09 PM

Yes, a hard emotion indeed...but nicely expressed! Good write!

sp

do I believe we'd be better off apart?
can I see my world without you in it?
baby, not for a single minute...

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

5 posted 2001-03-05 10:34 PM

Its never easy knowing your love isnt returned....and knowing you have to let go...beautifully told

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

6 posted 2001-03-06 03:03 PM

Hi Disgruntled,

So very sad when love is not returned, but for your poem you did such a wonderful job writing it, your thoughts were conveyed perfectly,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

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