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Poeminister
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0 posted 2001-03-04 05:17 PM


Meet Me In The Clouds

Meet me in the Clouds
where angels soar
under the gazing stars-
they'll be our dance floor

At highest stratum
where time stands still
where all things flow
by our supernal will

Meet me in the clouds
where dreams stretch
bridgeing from one to another
where all ends touch

Lets go in the starlight
to a heavenly height
Won't you meet me in the clouds
in the clouds tonight

Poeminister


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Meadowmuse
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1 posted 2001-03-04 06:52 PM


Beautiful and nostalgic, something divine to dance to.

Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau


SEA
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with you
2 posted 2001-03-04 06:57 PM


PM~ this is enchanting........ SEA

If I let you into my heart.....
will you promise to stay?
~Sue~

Lone Wolf
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3 posted 2001-03-04 08:38 PM


Poeminister,

Lovely thoughts and writing.

Lone Wolf


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

Sunshine
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4 posted 2001-03-04 08:43 PM


Sir, you are stretching, and most beautifully....thank you...
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5 posted 2001-03-04 09:31 PM


a beautiful dance in the clouds.....I agree with SEA this was very enchanting...




Greeneyes~


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Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
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A Whisper's Caress
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6 posted 2001-03-04 11:29 PM


wow, wow, and wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

take my breath away....


May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

Paula Finn
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missouri
7 posted 2001-03-05 12:27 PM


I can only echo those before me...this is divine...I'd love to dance with you
Janet Marie
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8 posted 2001-03-05 10:54 AM


Meet me in the Clouds
where angels soar
under the gazing stars-
they'll be our dance floor
================
bridgeing from one to another
where all ends touch

Lets go in the starlight
to a heavenly height
Won't you meet me in the clouds
in the clouds tonight
=============

lovely celestial images laced with a melodic cadence...
a poetic combination creating a harmony...
well done poet sir



It's amazing
how you make your face just like a wall
how you take your heart and turn it off
how I turn my head and lose it all
MB20

Cerenity
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9 posted 2001-03-05 10:54 AM


Hi Poeminister,

I really enjoy your poetry simply beautiful and a challenge well met, having to save this one for future reads, thank you.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



DreamLess
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10 posted 2001-03-05 11:00 AM


very nice words...
so dreamy something that i need ..


WRITTEN BY ME..(17 YRS HIGHSCHOOL GIRL)
EASY ON ME.. I'M JUST AN AMATEUR
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