When Sleep Pulls---my attempt at my phrase challenge

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Open Poetry #12

When Sleep Pulls---my attempt at my phrase challenge

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

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Oregon

0 posted 2001-03-04 04:59 PM

When Sleep Pulls
Virginia Salter

Sleep drags me by the eyelashes, upon a old braid rug
the tongues of my shoes get fifty lashes for keeping toes from snug

My lids keep slamming shut, as a player shoots right past,
must be some sort of mind control, cuz mine has surely passed.

© March 2, 2001

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

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Hurricane Alley

1 posted 2001-03-04 07:15 PM

LOL..cute!!!

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

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Regina SK; Canada

2 posted 2001-03-04 07:20 PM

I like it

Voiceless
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since 2001-02-19

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Under the stars upon the wind

3 posted 2001-03-04 07:24 PM

Fun to read!

~*Peachy Be*~

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2001-03-04 11:14 PM

Glad you all enjoyed my mindless sleep induced drivel.

Kerri S
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since 1999-06-08

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Rhode Island

5 posted 2001-03-05 10:12 AM

Thanks Vas you have just pin pointed how I feel when it's time for bed. Very cute read

Kerri

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16

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Escondido-California

6 posted 2001-03-06 09:27 AM

Hi Vas,

This was a cute read and I think you met the challenge well, enjoy much,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

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