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poertyman2002
Junior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 32
Florida, US

0 posted 2001-03-05 04:08 PM

This may not exactly be poetry but I will do my best,
I hurt two of my great friends,
Betrayed them by writing something that was not my business in a place they go,
No it was not a public place but yes it was on show,
Only if you go tho.
And Why I did this I dont know.
Now they r upset and everyone else despises me,
And why, because I was a geek,
I wrote what had nothing to do with me,
My heart breaks now, and no guilt wanted,
The truth is out, I am unwanted.

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

1 posted 2001-03-08 03:23 PM

It's hard to take back the mistakes we make. All one can do is ask for forgivness and NEVER make that mistake again.

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

2 posted 2001-03-08 08:47 PM

i hope that you are feeling better as this mail gets to you and i will say that this is poetry since poetry is an expression of the soul...

at the risk of sounding harsh, may i say that we all make mistakes but please don't let that undermine yourself...

hugs

POETIC THUG
Junior Member

since 2001-03-08

Posts 42
HOUSTON TEXAS BABY

3 posted 2001-03-08 09:56 PM

SAY,LOOK OUT POETRYMAN,WE ALL MAKE MISTAKES BUT AT LEAST U ADMIT IT WHEN U ARE WRONG.THERE ARE TO MANY PEEP'S IN THA WORLD WHO WOULD HAVE NEVER GAVE IT A SECOND THOUGHT.KEEP YOUR HEAD UP AND KEEP YOUR IMMAGINATION FLOWING....YA DIG???

POETIC THUG
Junior Member

since 2001-03-08

Posts 42
HOUSTON TEXAS BABY

4 posted 2001-03-08 09:56 PM

SAY,LOOK OUT POETRYMAN,WE ALL MAKE MISTAKES BUT AT LEAST U ADMIT IT WHEN U ARE WRONG.THERE ARE TO MANY PEEP'S IN THA WORLD WHO WOULD HAVE NEVER GAVE IT A SECOND THOUGHT.KEEP YOUR HEAD UP AND KEEP YOUR IMMAGINATION FLOWING....YA DIG???

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

5 posted 2001-03-08 10:22 PM

I agree that you should move on, but let your friends know your sorry, maybe then you can be friends again, I believe that's where the pain is, you've lost that connection and you need to resolve this. We all make mistakes.

poertyman2002
Junior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 32
Florida, US

6 posted 2001-03-09 05:17 PM

Well. in happiness I say.
I am friends with them agaain today.
Yet no one should be sad,
For they are no longer mad.
I fought a battle, and I have one,
But this battle was no fun.
For friends mean too much to me,
As my poetry can see.

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