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Cerenity
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0 posted 2001-03-04 12:51 PM



Stairway to Luna


This night with temperate breeze
Luna hangs low in the sky,
remnants of a magnificent thunderstorm
that would have pleased the Gods
left billowy stacks of clouds resembling
stairs reaching to Luna’s realm.

Luna in her fullness, a tone soft and
gentle to the eye begins her dance,
peace has fallen on the land
the quietness is soothing to the ear.
At this moment I fell as if I
were the only soul in the universe
and Luna is calling me to her realm.

Beckoning gently come stay a while
see as she sees, enjoy beauty
beyond imagination, see the earth
in shades opposite day.
Dance around this blue crystal orb
as she makes her fullness known.

Luna enchantress of the night graced
in beauty and wonder has
been the beginning to many love stories,
and the eye that sees mans
souls for what they are.

Dances only once
in a cycle in her fullness but
continues her watch from the heavens
each and every night with tender
affection for the earth and
its inhabitants.

May you be graced with her beauty as I,




By, Cerenity





"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



© Copyright 2001 Ellen Ware - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
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1 posted 2001-03-04 01:19 PM


Oh, Cerenity....
you've touched on a subject that all gypsies love......the moon, and dancing. They just seem to be a part of my soul, as this poem has become!! thank you for putting it here for my gypsy eyes to read!!


Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!




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2 posted 2001-03-04 02:02 PM


we are. . . and we shall. . .

excellent my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

snowpants
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3 posted 2001-03-04 05:49 PM


'Luna enchantress of the night graced
in beauty and wonder has
been the beginning to many love stories,
and the eye that sees mans
souls for what they are.'

Beautiful, beautiful write, cerenity! I absolutely love this!!

sp


do I believe we'd be better off apart?
can I see my world without you in it?
baby, not for a single minute...

Poeminister
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4 posted 2001-03-04 09:31 PM


"...and the eye that sees mans
souls for what they are. "

Cerenity--Enchanting imagery...excellent writing.

Poeminister

Cerenity
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5 posted 2001-03-05 10:46 AM


Hi
Sunny, Sven, Snowpants, Poeminister,

Thank you all for your loving replys to this poem, she was so beautiful just had to write about her you all know how that is, once again thank you.

Love, Cerenity

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6 posted 2001-03-06 10:19 AM


You've graced us with a beauty of a poem... well done! *S*
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7 posted 2001-03-06 11:15 AM


very, very lovely...
Cerenity
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8 posted 2001-03-06 06:15 PM


Hi
Suthern and Lady in White

Thank you so much, she was beautiful and gave me much to write about,

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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