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Carly Maas
Junior Member
since 2000-04-21
Posts 23
Garden City, MI, USA

0 posted 2001-03-04 12:05 PM


I see,
I taste,
I touch,
I feel.

I breathe,
I laugh,
I sing,
I cry.

I hear,
I listen,
I talk,
I smell.

I do a lot of things,
and that includes loving you,
I can't explain it,
but it's true.

If you ask me how I feel about you,
I'll tell you what I feel is true,
I know what it true,
I'll always love you.




"One day you'll love me as I onced loved you,
one day you'll cry over me, as I once cried over
you, and one day you'll want me but I won't want you.

© Copyright 2001 Carly Maas - All Rights Reserved
Sunnyone
Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England
1 posted 2001-03-04 01:26 PM


All the senses get involved when one loves from the heart.....there's just no way to seperate body from soul!! Great write, and I hope to read more.....I like your style!!


Live...Love...Be grateful for both!!




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