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Every Day |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
 it’s not enough... a lifetime of fantasies realized... dedicating to you each day; never too frequently could I glance over my shoulder and find that smile gleaming back at me. the remainder of my days will be spent feeling the breeze of your sincerity on my face... walking with you through endless pastures of yellow.... lying beside you in the overgrown grass, staring at the night sky above as you whisper gently through your kisses of your unending devotion. never could I get enough of these musings, which you have made reality... your voice will remain a constant... in my life I have never found such a promise. because of your brilliant countenance, I will never endure another night of shadows; you’ve found me here...you’ve comprehended this side of love. a lifetime will never be sufficient to express my unconditional adoration. never again will I be left alone to wander the deserted road of oblivion... you’ve removed any possibility of my facing each day alone. my world lies in you...my everything will remain in your eyes. everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips... every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips... |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
wowza...you do it again! good lord woman...you are amazing these days. powerful writing you have here--full of so much love and devotion! keep em coming my sweet friend...for im enjoying every word you write... take care loves ya amy  "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Perfect loving poem........*sigh* "my world lies in you...my everything will remain in your eyes." beautiful SEA |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
This is simply beautiful |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
I enjoyed reading this. Very nicely written. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
never could I get enough of these musings, which you have made reality... your voice will remain a constant... in my life I have never found such a promise. because of your brilliant countenance, I will never endure another night of shadows; you’ve found me here...you’ve comprehended this side of love. ========================= very cool SP ... excellent use of imagery and emotions to make your poetic declarations your muse has inspired you to new heights of expression. very well done once again poetess girlie  Strange ... the desire for certain pleasures is a part of my pain. ~Kahlil Gibran~ |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Aims: hey girlie...thanks so much! you are too sweet! I'm glad you liked it, 'cuz it didn't quite come out the way it was in my head, and you've made me feel better about it! Yer da best! -e ~~~~~~  SEA: why thank you! a sigh, eh? Too cool! I'm glad you enjoyed this!  Paula: thank you, m'friend! glad you could stop by!! kitkat: thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it! sp  everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips... every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips... |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
hey, JM...you sneaked in there on me! but I'm glad ya did! thank you for your great reply...and, yes, my muse has given me some wonderful inspiration as of late! thanks for reading!!sp everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips... every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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