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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2001-03-02 08:52 PM



Wouldst thou come now to softly steal mine heart?
And once upon a time
when thou hast stolen mine heart,
wouldst thou also givest to me
an everlasting and eternal love?

Wouldst thou let me see thy love shine
from thine heart?
Wouldst thou look deep into mine eyes
and see the love that shineth
from mine soul?

Wouldst thou let me love thee
for an eternity?
Wouldst thou please come now.....
and softly steal mine heart?


Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s*

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walker
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1 posted 2001-03-02 08:56 PM


Beautiful! The best way to steal a heart softly.

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

Gentle Spirit
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2 posted 2001-03-02 08:58 PM


Thanks for stopping in and leaving thoughts Walker. Much appreciate it.

Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s*

Poeminister
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3 posted 2001-03-02 09:08 PM


Romantic and pulsing with Shakespearean style...lovely write.

Poeminister



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Sunshine
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4 posted 2001-03-02 09:37 PM


uh oh - the muses are out....wonderful...
Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2001-03-02 09:52 PM


Pm, Sunshine, thanks to you both for the kind words, and for stopping in. Hugs

Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s*

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6 posted 2001-03-02 10:13 PM


yes..........softly......... this is wonderful! SEA
Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2001-03-02 10:26 PM


Thanks for stopping in Sea, and leaving your kind words. peace~

Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s*

Red-uni
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8 posted 2001-03-05 10:58 AM


Lovely, thanks for posting.
Red

Gentle Spirit
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9 posted 2001-03-05 11:01 AM


Thank you Red, for stopping by and reading. ~peace~


Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s*

DreamLess
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10 posted 2001-03-05 11:10 AM


real lovely..so romantic and gentle

just like your name


WRITTEN BY ME..(17 YRS HIGHSCHOOL GIRL)
EASY ON ME.. I'M JUST AN AMATEUR
[img]file://A:/hearts1.gif[/img]

suthern
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11 posted 2001-03-06 10:26 AM


What a lovely, romantic poem! I like this very much! *S*
kitkat
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12 posted 2001-03-06 01:05 PM


Oh I really like this. It is truly romantic*sighs*
Gentle Spirit
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13 posted 2001-03-06 09:37 PM


Dreamless, Suthern, Kitkat, lol.....I think I will always be a romantic at heart. Thanks for stopping in and leaving your kind words. ~peace

Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s*

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