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NC Member
since 2001-02-20
Posts 89 |
yes, my eyes can see you standing in the mirror but if i stepped inside the glass crowded with your faces would One, or All remember the soft and gentle whispers the strange and silent Knowing i've yet to understand yes, my ears can hear you testing with emotion you say you believe as i believe but now's the time for trust... enough to share the secrets of those who press their fingers to glass, and plead with eyes for me to take them home |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Like this very much...I am kind of looking in that mirror sometimes even behind the glass...... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Love it! We have many reflections of the inner self and we struggle with each of them. A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
One All Knowing |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
very interesting......I liked this very much.  SEA |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I like this....a brilliant write! Nathan |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Fascinating thinking, rather Lewis Carroll in nature. Nice. |
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