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Reality Dream (1000th)
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Reality Dream (1000th) |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Pale shadows from now, Haunted the dreams of my past, And in fear I would bow, Just so my dreams would last, And so I'd remain in dream, Never gave myself a break, I'd fool myself to keep dreaming, Even though I was wide awake, But now I see right though dreams, And float along on reaity's beam. The world doesn't stop for you, but you can stop for the world. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Congrat's on 1000!  This is great..... SEA |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Beautiful! and CONGRATS! A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Moon Dust, Wonderful write....congrats on 1000!! Poeminister [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 03-02-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
a beam of reality. . . sometimes can show us what we've been missing. . . wonderful!! Congratulations!!! ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Oh Maria, this is lovely! Congrats on 1000! |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
What a wonderful way to celebrate your 1000th posting. CONGRATS and may you find the path to 2000 as wonderful as these words you shared with us today. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
A well written reality check on your 1000th post. Congradulations! and may you write ten thousand others..........however, I do think that dreams are so very important but like Kipling says..."If you can dream and not make dreams your master If you can think and not make thoughts your aim." That seems to be the key...balance in all things and man! that's so hard to accomplish....take care and I wish you the very best in your endeavours.....ethome The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sooner or later we all have to face reality...what is and isn't ours...who we really are...congratulations on 1000...James |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Very well written, Moon Dust. Reality always has a way of sneaking up on you. Congratulations on your 1000th!!!! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Thanks all, glad to be here Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning. |
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