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the romantic fanatic
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since 2000-08-05
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Spokane, WA U.S.A.

0 posted 2001-03-02 05:13 PM


As she walks she casts her image upon the wall as she walks on down the hall
She passes images of lover's gone passes images of love forlorn
Her feet shuffle her feet drag as she comes to face with her past.
Ahead tears stain the ground beaneath and beasts forgotten bear their teeth
Words here echo as if spoken aloud set to envelope and to enshroud
Back to start,from dust she came and wither dwindle us all the same.


D-mon



© Copyright 2001 Darric A. Lengling - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2001-03-02 05:20 PM


Good poem but sad. I particularly liked the phrasing.
write on
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



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