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the romantic fanatic Junior Member
since 2000-08-05
Posts 26Spokane, WA U.S.A. 
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Again comes the dawn as another day moves And the sky above, painted rusted hues Awaits the rising of the sun, Then turns to blue. |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Nice writing and welcome! I enjoy minimalism when it's done well and you've definitely done that! "The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new. Socrates |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Nicely wriiten The world doesn't stop for you, but you can stop for the world. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Simply beautiful! A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
makes me think of the coast.........  SEA |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
the romantic fanatic - well done writing, and welcome. I'm sure to read more of your poetry. BC |
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