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When First I Came (My 3000 post thank you Passions, and a repost of my very first post Magic) |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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When first I Came When I first came upon you I was clothed in night I was lonely I was desolate I couldn’t see the light The stars didn’t know me, for me they didn’t shine I’d lost my way and hope, I was so very far from fine I came upon you on my way it was quite by chance You smiled, beckoning me to join in poetic dance My first steps here were awkward I was so unsure All I knew was that here I found my missing core My spirit unfurled like a rose just starting to bloom My life was a tapestry taking its shape on the loom Your poetic words gave me the stitches of my heart I think that right here was where I began to start My poetic ramblings you read and didn’t turn away Just for that I’d be thanking you forever and a day I wouldn’t say my writings are beautiful but it’ll do As long as I can stay here for all eternity with you You are the reason to my rhyme don’t you now see That here in this haven my refuge I found beauty I’ve likened you to wines to flowers and other things You Passionate Poets are the reason my soul sings I can’t explain the magic that calls forth my heart My friends and my family here I will never be apart You given me so much you’ve restored my lost soul I thank you Passions Poets for making me whole Marsha -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Magic Never did believe in magic It wasn't for the likes of me Cheap tricks with smoke and mirrors Speedy hand deceives the eye No such thing as magic Sadly, I breathe a sigh Could there be a little magic Whispered in the words of song Running through my life I stumble You took my hand and helped me rise Could there be a little magic Shining softly in your eyes Maybe I believe in magic Could it be there for me Painting my heart and life with rainbows Spining starlight through my dreams Maybe there's some special magic Maybe it's not only dreams Truly I believe in magic Nerver saw it there before Can't imagine life and love without it Magic, magic everywhere Yes there's really magic It fills me spills me everywhere Beverley Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 03-02-2001).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mushy~  you are so loved here............ SEA |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Ahhhhhhhh!!! CONGRATULATIONS ON 3000!!!!!!  Hugs to you Mushy!!! SEA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice to be appreciated...wonderful 3000....James |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarshaGal~ Aren't you aware of just how GLAD we are to have you in this friendship circle ? Couldn't ask for a nicer friend or sweeter poet. YOU ROCK ... Thank you for being YOU !  *Hugs* n' *Love* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Marsha--And you've shown us magic... Congrats on 3000!! Poeminister |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
My magical, mushy, mystical, marvelous Marsha shines! Congrats on 3000! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
marsha- first & foremost--congrats don'tya know you make up part of why passions is so wonderful and magical. i know im personally forever grateful to be able to read your beautiful work and have you call me friend. this was just lovely, such a heartfelt and sincere tribute!! take care love ya amy "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
CONGRATS ON YOUR 3000th post!!!! You have brought much to Passions with your presence here and we all know it would not be the same as it is now without you. Wonderful writing and a great piece to celebrate with. |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
So true, everyone from passions make this site what it is. And congrads on 3000 The world doesn't stop for you, but you can stop for the world. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Mushy, We're so glad you came you've made a sort of fame your path here has been cleft with laughter if you left, no happy ever after I loved your phoenix rising and your bid to push horizons admired the way you smiled through pain and always ounced, came back again I've enjoyed your poetic musings and you're challenges some of which were bruising Let's raise our glass and give a hand for Beverly, Marsha, Mushy, Puck, Dear Heart, Grace, and the rest has reached 3000 CONGRATULATIONS DEAR ONE! KNOW YOU ARE LOVED!Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sister of the Phoenix You have indeed risen again and we have been the ones to see your heart a heart of light and of love rescued from the night of pain fly on tender one, fly on and fly free for in the song of your wings it is your life that we see To my Sister in the Phoenix. . . congratulations love. . . you have indeed grown and become renewed in every day that you have been here. . . I am honored to call you my friend. . . and hope that you will remain for a long time to come. . . These poems are just a sign of how far you've really come. . . and we are so proud of you. . .  ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Congratulations on your landmark post you have written a lovely tribute to mark your milestone with. nice contrast to see the first post as well. take care jm Strange ... the desire for certain pleasures is a part of my pain. ~Kahlil Gibran~ |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Congratulations! *S* You reached a milestone and gave us the gifts for your celebration. *S* Well done! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
3000...surely not darlin...congrats...and please dear sister of my heart...stick around for 3000 more |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Maybe I believe in magic Could it be there for me Painting my heart and life with rainbows Spinning starlight through my dreams very touching and telling words..lovely to be exact.. congratulations, Marsha on your 3000th ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Congratulations Marsha! Kathleen Blake "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
CONGRATS Mushy! I like what you've done here.....great tribute and the other is a nice touch.....love to ya my agent!! Waiting for the next 3000! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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