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Come To Me ! |
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DreamLess Member
since 2001-02-28
Posts 92 |
baby why did you go away .. when you know without you I could not stay .. you know that for you I would fly.. I would spend my whole life in tear and cry .. no matter how far you go.. I'll be where ever you are .. my heart and soul will be with you .. for ever no matter how far you are .. every time I look to the moon or sun .. I see your beautiful face in .. and every time I see it I know you're the one .. who make me suffer and that is done.. did you ever look to the stars?! .. have you noticed they look like your eyes .. they're both shining through the night .. but your's make me fall while the stars don't have you ever looked to the sea .. can you tell how much you mean to me .. as big as the sea is and even more.. and that thing is the only one I know for sure .. did you ever go to paradise?! .. well, I did for several times .. every time I look into your eyes .. Igo there and stay until I cry .. did you know how much you mean to me??! .. after all that won't you come back to me .. weren't I convincing to you?? .. if i were not.. I can tell you more !!.. WRITTEN BY ME..(17 YRS HIGHSCHOOL GIRL) EASY ON ME.. I'M JUST AN AMATEUR |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
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I thought this was very nicely done  SEA |
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DreamLess Member
since 2001-02-28
Posts 92 |
thank u for taking of your time to read what i have wrote..SEA WRITTEN BY ME..(17 YRS HIGHSCHOOL GIRL) EASY ON ME.. I'M JUST AN AMATEUR |
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