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A New Day
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A New Day |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A New Day I’ll coo you my words like birds in the blue Like spews in the mist painting the dew. Tinctures of Eden in glories new mourn A garden for two will baptize the dawn. Where butterfly wings give promise of more Where heaven has smiled and opened its door. Where the mind will reign in kindness and sane Where time makes no difference, no sand to drain. Where bells will ring in the sweet of rhyme And you will vibrate the chine of its chime Visiting mysteries of old times of yore And fly in eternities evermore. We’ll color all things the color of love Touched with the velvet from heaven above. Sing with the angels in valleys of green Teeter and totter the absolute mean. Hold hands through the rue of infinite lift Burn candles to God for giving this gift. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
All I can say is, I am grateful for the new way in which you allow me to read your works, and for all underlying meanings of where your words actually take us.... thank you Sy.... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Tinctures of Eden in glories new mourn A garden for two will baptize the dawn. Where butterfly wings give promise of more Where heaven has smiled and opened its door. Where the mind will reign in kindness and sane Where time makes no difference, no sand to drain. Where bells will ring in the sweet of rhyme And you will vibrate the chine of its chime =================== We’ll color all things the color of love Touched with the velvet from heaven above. =================== Hold hands through the rue of infinite lift Burn candles to God for giving this gift. ================= *sigh* ..this gets more amazing with every read. what a exquisite piece of spirtually enlightening inspiration this is. Sy this is an impressive level of inspire here... truly "Hold hands through the rue of infinite lift Burn candles to God for giving this gift." ****** "Where butterfly wings give promise of more Where heaven has smiled and opened its door. Where the mind will reign in kindness and sane Where time makes no difference, no sand to drain." how much beauty can one verse hold?? this is enchanting me sweet poetic prophet your have penned a sunrise--golden ... a rainbow braided across the sky... awesome write me *winkiewinkie* I thank you for the "lift"  love ya Stinky later-chingmechimes-gator *L* me Strange ... the desire for certain pleasures is a part of my pain. ~Kahlil Gibran~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Hey, look out into the crowd....no not there...over here!!!  See that big tiki torch waving back and forth in the middle of all those bic lighters??? That's me.  This piece is a masterpiece of both content and perfect cadence mixed with a superb example of writing style. Your rhyme, your choice of words and the composition of this whole piece would make a great case study on how to do it properly and set a goal for us all to reach. Excelllent read sir. Loved it much. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
silly me....forgot to put this jewel in me treasure box. tis mine now tho *winkiewinkie* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Thank you and *L* JM, Well you sure give me a lift. Winkiewinkie Stinky Mark, Wonderful comment, thank you much. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Sy* You bring such smiles to my face and delight me with your "coolness" as my SS Janet would say  Beautiful weaving dear poet~ |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
I enjoyed this excellent read......write on, Sy! |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
This is very beautiful Sy, great writing! Nathan |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Seems like that's a part of it all..." hold hands through the rue of infinite lift" If one can realize that there is always a certain amount of pain to combat through life and face that pain with objective and strength then one can realize the substance of eternal happiness....there's always sunshine after rain....good write!! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy the read |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Is that cruise over YET???? Needed a eye full of Sy so I could *sigh* *L* MISS YOU STINKY ... good thing I have a library full of you to tide me over while you ride the tides *ww*  |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, we will |
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