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my dawning sun's surprise
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my dawning sun's surprise |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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the morning hours do not like me-- no, they never have... the sun in rise makes me cry for all I've never had the lover's moon lowers too soon comply compliance drives me mad-- I long for whim a shed of skin for just a night with you be had... this power that you have to hurt I gave to you I know I wish I could unsing my songs undance myself from off my toes but that would be the last of me returned unto my death to be remiss without your kiss-- my tongue believes she breathes your breath... Tell me that I live again. Tell me I am new. whisper nothing if you must but hold me now I beg of you and feel with me, the pull of sea, and rising of the tide... stay with me and grant release-- be my dawning sun's surprise. [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 03-02-2001).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
serenity, very yearning poem here. I liked it alot. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
for all I've never had the lover's moon lowers too soon comply compliance drives me mad-- I long for whim a shed of skin for just a night with you be had... this power that you have to hurt I gave to you I know I wish I could unsing my songs undance myself from off my toes but that would be the last of me returned unto my death to be remiss without your kiss-- my tongue believes she breathes your breath... ====================== *sigh* ... so many mirrors so much bittersweet beauty in your precise rhymes "this power that you have to hurt I gave to you I know" you know... that I know...yayaya you know me motto... tis not easy being a moth baby... love ya me twin me Strange ... the desire for certain pleasures is a part of my pain. ~Kahlil Gibran~ |
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Dennis Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 235Indiana |
He should be begging YOU; especially during the Mardis Gras!! I liked your poem Dennis |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Serenity! The pull of this is enigmatic...thank you so very much...a most wonderfully haunting write.... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This made me think of when a lover pulls away...and I so desperately want their love but I begin to accept their desire to pull away....and it is never the same...my desires start to die as a began to let go...I don't want to let go but I know that I cannot continue to hold onto someone that is leaving...slowly...one step at a time...but I must take those steps with them...James |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
geez...here's another I'd forgotten about! How rude of me not to say thank you! geesh..sorry! THANK YOU! |
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