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walker
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since 2001-02-11
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0 posted 2001-03-02 07:36 AM



I am a droplet
in space, wondering
between heaven and earth.
Floating without leads,
where I'll end up or
where I want to be.
A small fraction of a
bigger portion. But
important,just the same.
With the rain, I become many.
With the drought, I evaporate.
But always, returning, light,
fragile, and strong.


A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

© Copyright 2001 walker - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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1 posted 2001-03-02 07:46 AM


walker,
lovely, glistening, write
Kethry

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)
2 posted 2001-03-04 09:32 AM


this was cool yuh a small bit o the big pic
Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada
3 posted 2001-03-05 12:50 PM


Excellent comparison...enjoyed the read.

Poeminister

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637
Escondido-California
4 posted 2001-03-06 01:01 AM


Hi Walker,

This is wonderful, enjoyed thank you,

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
5 posted 2001-03-06 08:55 PM


Walker, this is very descriptive. I feel this way sometimes, myself.
Great write.
Sandra

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
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6 posted 2001-03-07 03:13 PM


yes, but even a droplet is guided by ..someone..something...lovely thought here

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
7 posted 2001-03-07 03:14 PM


Amazing how a droplet can wear away the largest mountain....

well done Walker....

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