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dreams. . . (III)
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dreams. . . (III) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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"good night" the dream begins and I hear your voice c o m i n g across the astral plain and here in my own plane d a r k n e s s holds in its my heart hands as it pulses with consciousness my body shifts in time to reach my hand holds to touch the dream ends and I hear your voice "good morning" and it continues. . . --------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
ahh..to hear that..would be wonderous.  Beautiful work, Sven. You just keep doing it..again and again. |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
wow...How very very creative!!!! wonderful poem..yep..I enjoyed this as much as all the poems I have read by you! aloha Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Gorgeous Sven...truly gorgeous. I loved the format too...wonderful!  *Krista Knutson* I'm a slow dying flower In a frost-killing hour The sweet turning sour and untouchable... -Natalie Merchant |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
indeed life is a dream when all beautiful has been fulfilled... and i must really get down to writing one of these concrete poems one of these days... |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
the dream ends and I hear your voice "good morning"  *** Greeneyes~ "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Now that would be the perfect way to end the dream, with a good morning from the right person. If only... Another gem, keep dreaming.. Sandra |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Temptress, yes, it would be wonderful. . . and yes, I'll keep doing it. . . writing that is. . . Koko, thank you!! I'm glad that you've enjoyed this. . . Alwye, thank you. . . I've been having fun with formatting recently!! kaile, indeed it is wonderful when the dream comes true. . . and yes, I would love to see a poem like this from you!!! Greeneyes, Good Morning  Sandra, indeed this would be perfect. . . we just have to believe it will come true. . . thank you. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, I really liked this... But why Is "My heart" so bold. (well that didn't come out the way I wanted it to) Why have you bolded my heart.(no) Why are the words my heart in bold (finally!) Write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
oh my....this is fabulous, and I love the art that you present here. excellent as always my friend ((hugs)) Charisma |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Beautifully written. I'm glad that not only in your dreams but also while your awake someone has come to make you smile. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
just lovely thoughts, Sven ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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