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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2001-02-28 11:45 PM



Upon This Midnight Hour
~*Marge Tindal*~

Come to me, love, in the midnight hour
When the sky is bathed in meteor shower
Boldly ablaze with such flaming power
Meant for loving you

Let's spirit across this Milky Way night
Soaring with sheer heavenly delight
Pausing in just a moment of light
Reflecting on this love

I'll hold you gently in arms so true
Shade this night with special hue
Feathered with the blush of you
Upon this midnight hour



~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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SEA
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1 posted 2001-02-28 11:51 PM


Whoo hoo there Margie girl.....midnight lovin eh? This is beautiful! SEA
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2 posted 2001-02-28 11:58 PM


How to say, if only life, would answer the call, and be this way. I hope for you it does.


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3 posted 2001-03-01 12:16 PM


Margie girl...this is very romantic...there must be a moon or two shinning on you...I haven't seen the moon in such a long time...just rain. (cozy rain)
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4 posted 2001-03-01 12:23 PM


Simply lovely, it flowed so nicely when I read it..read it outloud..sometimes that's the best way to FEEL poetry.
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5 posted 2001-03-01 12:57 PM


Wonderful! This is ethereal in feel, made me feel as though I was listening to a Greek God & Godess as they made their universal caresses throughout the heavens. Enchanting!
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6 posted 2001-03-01 02:41 AM


MARGE
Boy!!!! I'm speechless in Nahunta, sitting near the Florida/Georgia state line. Your poem made me wish; now I have "luv'n" on my mind.
What is it about the witching hour for SEA & yourself.(lol)
By the way, this was a great write. Excellently penned. I loved it. I can't comment on it enough.


Garfield

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7 posted 2001-03-01 02:49 AM


oh.. its so simple but very affective
you see ..
the poems reflect what's in side the poet
and what i can see is a pure soul in their

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8 posted 2001-03-01 04:13 AM


Very nice Marge..James
Marge Tindal
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SEA~
Yeah, gal ... how 'bout you ?

ATelamon~
Yes, it does.
Thank you for your thoughts.

Martie~
I send you a slice of moonbeams
upon a moistened sky
Spinning dreams in the midnight hour
to catch you on a *sigh*
*Hugs*

PoetdeVine~
Oh ... I so agree.
It's the ONLY way to read 'em.
Thank you for the read.

VAS~
Thanks for a stirring comment.

GGRN~
*got me grinning*

DreamLess~
I hope that my writing is sometimes
the reflection of my soul.
Thank you for the read.

JamesMichael~
*Hugs* and a thank you.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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10 posted 2001-03-01 01:08 PM


take us to the stars via your heart Margie-girl
wonderful celestial imagery here!!!
love that milky way about ya


Strange ... the desire for certain pleasures is a part of my pain.
~Kahlil Gibran~

Marge Tindal
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11 posted 2001-03-01 08:21 PM


JanetMarie~
Oh my ... the night is indeed lit
with the splendor of the stars !
*Hugs*, hon !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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12 posted 2001-03-01 10:21 PM


Thus is the birth of another midnight rainbow on the horizon. Beautiful write my friend.
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13 posted 2001-03-01 10:24 PM


Great flow,
Great poem!



~*Peachy Be*~

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14 posted 2001-03-02 11:14 AM


I love the sweet romance of this beautiful write! *S*
Marge Tindal
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15 posted 2001-03-02 01:41 PM


MarkB~
You send a rainbow of loving thoughts with just knowing you read ...
Love ya'

VoiceLess~
Thank you so much.

SuthernGal~
There is much beauty found in the romance of the night ...
You're a sweet lady to visit.
~*Marge*~




~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com


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16 posted 2001-03-02 03:37 PM


"Feathered with the blush of you
Upon this midnight hour"

Lovely thoughts and imagery...beautiful write.

Poeminister

"There is no remedy for love but to love more."
--Henry David Thoreau



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