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Open Poetry #12

Just a Lick Of Paint

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

0 posted 2001-02-28 06:59 PM

Rusted through,
And chrome pitted,
Scratch in the wax,
You were car of my dreams,

Paint flaking,
Beriddled with woodrot,
Huge crack amosnt bricks,
You were the house of my dreams,

Dole queue,
Sitting around,
Selling on street corner,
I had the job of my dreams,

Just a new lick of paint needed.

The world doesn't stop for you, but you can stop for the world.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-02-28 08:04 PM

it should always be that simple. . .

excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-03-04 09:15 PM

I wish life were so easy!! Nice writing.

Celeste
Senior Member

since 2000-11-11

Posts 597

3 posted 2001-03-04 09:58 PM

*smiling* I love this attitude!

"Success is going from failure to failure without losing enthusiasm."

~Winston Churchill~

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

4 posted 2001-03-04 10:13 PM

Well what kind of car was it??
Just kidding!
A great way to look at things!

~*Peachy Be*~

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

5 posted 2001-03-05 04:29 PM

Thanks everone

Don't ever give in, if you do you've lost everything you've ever had and everything you hope to gain, but if you carry on your already winning.

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