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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Ideas of What if... Fastened together by the contact of our eyes, I find my trembling hand steadied by the strength of your own. Emotions stirring inside me, a whirlpool of passionate desire grows stronger, as we both know the pleasures awaiting our ever abounding fantasies. Afraid I'll say something silly unable to utter a sound -- filled with ideas of what if -- my shyness draws you closer to me still, sharing a passion so intense, it brings a weakness to my knees. by Annie achildsheart May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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mystic requiem Member
since 2001-01-26
Posts 144 |
*applause* Your words are so well woven. I do so much enjoy your work. (yes, it's me. I usually go to the dark room but have ventured out and about) *hugz*   |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Beautiful.....The breath caught in your throat, as a butterfly spreads her silken wings. What an emotion! "The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new. Socrates |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
Wonderfully written. What desire burns in this piece. It makes me envious for that strength of passion. Excellent. "Death marks the beginning, not the end. It is our journey to God." --Billy Graham |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
when do "what if's" become "why not's"??  wonderful. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Whisper- Lovely write, very wistful and passionate...beautifully penned. take care, Poeminister "There is no remedy for love but to love more." --Henry David Thoreau |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Very passionate poem, loved it! A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
positively LOVE this  SEA |
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