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Spare One Moment
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Spare One Moment |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Spare One Moment Fly with me a moments pause Ride a ride with Santa Claus. Spare a moment to be free. Take my hand and come with me. Forget about your daily chores Spend a moment in a pause. An instant that won’t be missed Come with me I do insist. Try your wings of colored hue Fly with me into the blue. See the world through colored eyes See and hear the earth in sigh. Listen with your inner ear Listen true without a fear. Listen heavens harp in vent Just one instant as was meant. An instant is a lifetime long An instant is the earth in song. |
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DreamLess Member
since 2001-02-28
Posts 92 |
very lovely.. (an instant is a life time long) really deep meaning i love it very much |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
This is heavenly You've captured that moment In a beautiful poem Liz |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I so believe in Santa Claus... the dreamer in me gives great pause to ride the rainbows without end... only to turn, and do it....again... Thank you Sy... |
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mystic requiem Member
since 2001-01-26
Posts 144 |
Wonderful imagery! "See the world through colored eyes" might could be "See the world through kaleidoscope eyes" Think about it. *S*   |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dreamless, Good comment thank you. Elizabeth, The comment is almost as sweet as you are. Sy Sunshine, Beautiful response. *L* Mystic, Kaleidoscope is a good word but has a hard sound, thanks for the comment. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I'll fly with you ... to blue lagoon I'll fly with you ... to neon moon We'll ride Randy .... off to Shangri-La land on the beaches ... of Casablanca Theres no where ... we cant go in time all we need ... is our minds entwined Our words give us ... wings to fly we wont know ... if we dont try *winkiewinkie* Strange ... the desire for certain pleasures is a part of my pain. ~Kahlil Gibran~ |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Just for a moment I flew with you Now I thank you for heavens view. You have started my day with a smile. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Inot2B, Sweet comment, thank you much. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, We will fly, we will fly, we will fly. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this, Seymour! You've written well of those moments that make life worth living! *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, The more moments you be The more you will see. *L* Sy Thank you sweet |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Haaaa... Sir Tabin... for that one spare moment you have provided the perfect view. Thank you for the pleasure of your words. Peace! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Andrew, It was my pleasure and thank you. |
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