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Burst of Storm
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Burst of Storm |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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 Burst of Storm look at us! a connection burst reconnecting now, in this life sparking delight fingertips sparkling a mystery of light touch me now! for no caress will do no! we meet with cymballic nature and symbolic fervor and symbols that tremble thunder rumbles flashing crashes and in the aftermath in the aftermath God will grant us breath… breathe for me please, exhale let me know you live, and let me know you forgive the fact that we have waited so long to reconnect…. in circumspect should we wait or crash again bring the air up tight and let it spin tornado a moment or hurricane a sigh or let it go by and bye comfort comes in the aftermath it lends its way down long green path ah, but see the sight white of light within dark of bright clouds make night within the day electric confluence holds the sway know that I am within your charm but I am grounded within your arms afterwhich the ozone lays new and bright and comes in haze of nebulous feel a miraculous real and look at us we are an appeal,,, Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ Well .... it certainly appeals to me ! !  Me likes muchly ! Had to turn off the computer earlier, cause we had a burst of storm ! Different storm for sure !  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
This is too cool!! So creative I thought. I enjoyed this. Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
This has a marvelous feel to it as it is read. Well done! |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Awesome Sunshine! This has spectacular word usage and ideas....and a great flow and format to top it all of! Incredibly well done, I'm impressed my friend!  *Krista Knutson* I'm a slow dying flower In a frost-killing hour The sweet turning sour and untouchable... -Natalie Merchant |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
The perfect storm... Love it. Poeminister "There is no remedy for love but to love more." --Henry David Thoreau [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 02-28-2001).] |
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