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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind 
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A fire burns as lovers sleep during spring rain beneath the earth In the seas of night songs voice through silence, in strides along the edges of darkness that speak softly My lips would dry your tears, as they speak your soft words, to a heart that walks through you when you are alone Bare your thirst, drink of the waters in passion weeping your shadows in arms of tired eyes ready to shut Of my heart you sleep in constant dreams deeper to a journey yet taken Beside you I lay, in tributes of the present, hanging your portrait stretched upon the earth as my canvas (as) I wear your m a s k of life, Together Close We sleep ************************************************ alot of people maybe will not understand this, sometimes my words go deep in thought..... [This message has been edited by Greeneyes (edited 02-27-2001).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
nice...very nice.... |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
This is beautiful!  Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
THis is a beautiful poem by a very beautiful young lady! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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Dennis Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 235Indiana |
lips, fire, thirst! aghhh this is great, keep writing, keep looking up! Dennis |
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mystic requiem Member
since 2001-01-26
Posts 144 |
"alot of people maybe will not understand this, sometimes my words go deep in thought....." never sell the reader short. We all view poetic gifts through our own eyes. A person might take offense to this statement. However...your work is wonderful. I see a beauty in this depth. Super!!! *thanx*   |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Soft and enchantful...nicely penned. Poeminister |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
indeed. . . this goes to the very depths of love, thought and art. . . excellent Greeneyes. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Greeneyes - I do understand your beautiful words of this writing. Very powerful, and much meaning. A most beautiful writing that I'm glad that I had the chance to read. BC |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
I am slowly coming to understand... |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Bump |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Both depth and beauty here. I enjoyed this much. Thank you for sharing this. Michael Proust- "Love is space and time measured by the heart" |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
So might this be where those times of admiration while the other sleeps comes into play? You know, all the wonderful warm thoughts that tiptoe through the mind and heart just simply bringing comfort and contentment. Lovely write from you as always and of course your unique style lends to the quality of this piece. |
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Dennis Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 235Indiana |
I had to come bsck and say I think that light from the cathedral is on your face and in those great words.... Dennis |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Sunshine~ Thank you for stopping by to read, it's appreciated much~ be well... Saunni~ Thanks so much! Kathleen~ your comment is very touching, thank you...be well... Dennis~ so glad you enjoyed, and thank you for coming back to say it again....  be well my friend~ mystic requiem~ ohhh I meant no disrespect by the statement, none at all....actually I was laying it on myself, I thank you for your words of support, and for reading....be well Poeminister~ well hello there, and a big thank you for stopping in twice....i appreciate your comments, and bump... Sven~  I am always so encouraged by your words....thank you my friendBill Charles~thank you forunderstanding, and for letting me know you enjoyed this...your comments are much appreciated... JLR~ thank you much....be well... Auguste~ I have read your words as well, thank you so much for your kindness... Mark Bohannan~ Indeed it is, your words inspire....thank you my friend.... be well For those that read this, I meant no disrespect by the statement given, in understanding these words....If I offended anyone please forgive me, my statement was not intended to do so.....I am always in appreciation for any comments, support and replies given...Be well *** all... Sincerely...Greeneyes ******* "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful deep thoughts here, Greeneyes. Keep up the great work!! LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Lone Wolf~ I appreciate you stopping by, always nice to see you... be well my friend...Greeneyes~ *** "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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