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Open Poetry #12

In Your Dreams

inyourdreams
Junior Member

since 2001-02-25

Posts 10
paradise

0 posted 2001-02-28 02:30 PM

In your dreams,
I come to you.
Love's extremes
in shades of blue.
Wishes made
on stars at night;
moonlit shade,
I'm in your sight.

Kiss me sweet
upon my brow.
Let your dream
come to you now.
I reside
inside your heart,
passion wide,
I am a part
of your hope
when you're asleep.
My full scope
of love, you keep.

Dreams in flight
on lucent beams.
Soft moonlight,
I fill your dreams.

In your dreams,
I am, and you
live inside
my soul's renew!
Dream me now,
I'm coming true.
In your dreams,
I'm there with you.

February, 28, 2001

*dream on, baby, dream on me*

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

1 posted 2001-02-28 02:40 PM

"Dream me now,
I'm coming true.
In your dreams,
I'm there with you."

The flow in this piece is as silk...beautifully written.

Poeminister

"...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls-
O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

2 posted 2001-02-28 03:12 PM

There is great comfort in these words.

Corinne

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

3 posted 2001-02-28 03:39 PM

I'd love to dream like this. Beautiful.

inyourdreams
Junior Member

since 2001-02-25

Posts 10
paradise

4 posted 2001-02-28 07:12 PM

thank you, everyone, for reading my poem and i'm happy that you liked it

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-02-28 08:10 PM

ah yes. . .

to dream like this. . . again. . .

wonderful. . .

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